Whispering winds unwavering,
White tendrils drawing thin.
Soft susurrations savouring
The sky’s unending hymn.
Three thermal thrillings
Throwing their greying mist.
Swift soaking spillings
So long for being ‘sun-kissed’.
Ubiquitous unique universe,
Unanimously oppressed.
Aims addictively adverse,
And ultimately unstressed.
Blue babbles beginning –
Back again in time.
Pace partly pinning
A pensive little rhyme.
©2007-2008 ~dailenna
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for my 'Ten People' challenge thing. There are still places open if anyone else wants to make a request.
Although it begins about the sky (first two stanzas) I got carried away and ended up just going with the rhythm of the poem, so really the sky isn't the limit
for my 'Ten People' challenge thing. There are still places open if anyone else wants to make a request.Although it begins about the sky (first two stanzas) I got carried away and ended up just going with the rhythm of the poem, so really the sky isn't the limit
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